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1. nhoccon_21
Gửi lúc: 2011-08-05 17:36:34
Điểm: 9/10
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Kungfu panda is the best movie I have ever seen. Honestly, it is a cartoon, however, not only children but also adults like it. The main character of this film is a cute fat panda named Po. He wants to learn kungfu but his dad-Ping disagrees, he forces Po to be a trained cook like him. But one day, he meets his mentor-Ferrets Shifu and joins The Furious Five including his elder sisters-Tigeress and Viper, elder brothers-Monkey, Master Crane and Mantis.One day, Shifu's teacher-Tortoise Master Oogway has a vision that Shifu's former and foster son-the Evil Snow Leopard-Tai Lung will escape from the prison and return to The Valley Of Peace to take revenge for being denied the Dragon Scroll, which is said to hold the secret to limitless power. Shifu holds a kungfu tournament to identify the legendary Dragon Warrior. After watching Po's expression, Oogway chooses him. Finally, thank to Oogway's advice,Po defeats Tai Lung by an unique style_ Kungfu Panda and receives The Dragon Scroll. Through the story of Po, the filmmakers wish to send an message to everyone: Solve everything yourself, don't depend on the others, only you yourself can decide you life.
2. I_know_myself
Gửi lúc: 2011-08-05 21:54:02
Điểm: 9/10
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I used to see many movies and I think my most favourite movie is “Harry Potter”. It is based on the Harry Potter novels by J.K.Rowling. It is about a young boy named Harry Potter and his adventures as he attends Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, learns how to perform magic and comes face to face with his arch enemy, Lord Voldemort, the nationally feared Dark wizard and murderer of his mother and father. The three leading characters include Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. At the age of eleven, Harry learned from Rubeus Hagrid, the Hogwarts gamekeeper, that he was a wizard. He began attending Hogwart’s School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and was sorted into Gryffindor house. While at school, Harry became best friends with Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. He played a significant role in many battles. At the end of the story, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, the seventh and final novel in the series, Harry had a near death experience but finally, he defeated Voldemort and became an Auror. The reason I like “Harry Potter” is very simple: I like fiction films. When I read the novel series of J.K.Rowling or watch the film series of David Heyman, I can fly away into the magical world with my imagination. It’s so interesting. What I like best about “Harry Potter” film is about the stars, especially the main star, Daniel Radcliffe. I think he’s really handsome and he plays very excellently. Besides, the movie has many dramatic and surprising sections that attract viewers. It really interests me. I think “Harry Potter” is a wonderful movie. I love it.
3. haanh_123
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4. thienkhanh27
Gửi lúc: 2011-08-05 15:26:50
Điểm: 8/10
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The film named Hachiko,based on A dog's true story,made in USA,which I have seen for a long time is my favorite movie.The story telling about a loyal Japanese dog has made a large number of people in the whole world feel moved enough to burst into tears. A dog called Hachiko was born in November,1923 in Akita town,Japan.It was brought up by professor Uneno Eizaburo. He tried to give thoughtful care to his dog as if Hachiko had been his son.As usual,Hachiko saw his master off at the station to let him go to Tokyo University to teach in the morning.Hachiko wasn't allowed to follow him so when the time was 3 o'clock,Hachiko started going to the station to wait for him everyday.Unfortunately,Professor Uneno was suddenly died after having suffered a pain of hypertensive disease while standing in class to teach in May 12 ,1925.He was not be back to his dog for good.Hachiko still went to the station at 3 o'clock to meet its master without being known about master's death.But on that day,many train trips had passed by there.Without meeting its master,Hachiko didn't feel despondent.The small dog still stood there for waiting and waiting even though the sky was getting dark. Hachiko seemed to feel that a bad news happened but it still continued waiting for its master on time.Since then,people around the town has started to take notice of what Hachiko had done,its hopeless waiting for its dead master day by day.A gardener,a manager's station,everyone in the town rolated to feed the dog and take care of it. Spending a long time-many days,many months and many years-waiting for his master in hopelessness,Hachiko was still regularly present at the station at 3 o'clock despite having suffered in a joint's pain.Hachiko was too decrepit to stand there to wait for long time so after all,

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CHẤM ĐIỂM TRỰC TUYẾNMatrix Matrix tiểu luận Hào đề 11 - Matrix tiểu luậnHai này đã hết thời gian gửi haiXem nội quy gửi hai và điểm thưởngChỉ thành viên Vip mới được gửi haiBảng xếp Thiên1. nhoccon_21Gửi lúc: 2011-08-05 17:36:34Điểm: 9/10Xem hai gửiKungfu panda là bộ phim hay nhất mà tôi đã từng nhìn thấy. Trung thực, nó là một phim hoạt hình, Tuy nhiên, không chỉ là trẻ em mà còn là người lớn như nó. Nhân vật chính của bộ phim này là một chú gấu trúc béo dễ thương tên là Po. Ông muốn học võ thuật, nhưng ông bố-Ping không đồng ý, ông lực lượng Po là một đầu bếp được đào tạo như ông. Nhưng một ngày, anh gặp ông cố vấn-con chồn Shifu và tham gia The Furious Five bao gồm cả chị elder-Tigeress và Viper, người Anh của mình-con khỉ, chủ cần cẩu và Mantis.One day, Shifu của giáo viên-rùa Đại sư Oogway có một tầm nhìn của Shifu cũ và nuôi các con trai ác Snow Leopard-Tai Lung sẽ thoát khỏi nhà tù và quay trở lại thung lũng hòa bình để trả thù cho bị từ chối các thần Long bí kíp , mà là nói để giữ bí mật quyền lực vô hạn. Shifu đã tổ chức một giải đấu võ thuật để xác định các chiến binh rồng huyền thoại. Sau khi xem biểu hiện của Po, Oogway đã chọn anh ta. Cuối cùng, cảm ơn lời khuyên của Oogway, Po đánh bại Tai Lung bởi một style_ duy nhất Kungfu Panda và nhận được The Thần Long bí kíp. Thông qua câu chuyện của Po, các nhà làm phim muốn gửi một thư đến tất cả mọi người: giải quyết tất cả mọi thứ cho mình, không phụ thuộc vào người khác, chỉ có chính bạn có thể quyết định cuộc sống.2. I_know_myselfGửi lúc: 2011-08-05 21:54:02Điểm: 9/10Xem hai gửiI used to see many movies and I think my most favourite movie is “Harry Potter”. It is based on the Harry Potter novels by J.K.Rowling. It is about a young boy named Harry Potter and his adventures as he attends Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, learns how to perform magic and comes face to face with his arch enemy, Lord Voldemort, the nationally feared Dark wizard and murderer of his mother and father. The three leading characters include Harry Potter, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. At the age of eleven, Harry learned from Rubeus Hagrid, the Hogwarts gamekeeper, that he was a wizard. He began attending Hogwart’s School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and was sorted into Gryffindor house. While at school, Harry became best friends with Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. He played a significant role in many battles. At the end of the story, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, the seventh and final novel in the series, Harry had a near death experience but finally, he defeated Voldemort and became an Auror. The reason I like “Harry Potter” is very simple: I like fiction films. When I read the novel series of J.K.Rowling or watch the film series of David Heyman, I can fly away into the magical world with my imagination. It’s so interesting. What I like best about “Harry Potter” film is about the stars, especially the main star, Daniel Radcliffe. I think he’s really handsome and he plays very excellently. Besides, the movie has many dramatic and surprising sections that attract viewers. It really interests me. I think “Harry Potter” is a wonderful movie. I love it.3. haanh_123Gửi lúc:Điểm: 8/10Xem hai gửi4. thienkhanh27Gửi lúc: 2011-08-05 15:26:50Điểm: 8/10Xem hai gửiThe film named Hachiko,based on A dog's true story,made in USA,which I have seen for a long time is my favorite movie.The story telling about a loyal Japanese dog has made a large number of people in the whole world feel moved enough to burst into tears. A dog called Hachiko was born in November,1923 in Akita town,Japan.It was brought up by professor Uneno Eizaburo. He tried to give thoughtful care to his dog as if Hachiko had been his son.As usual,Hachiko saw his master off at the station to let him go to Tokyo University to teach in the morning.Hachiko wasn't allowed to follow him so when the time was 3 o'clock,Hachiko started going to the station to wait for him everyday.Unfortunately,Professor Uneno was suddenly died after having suffered a pain of hypertensive disease while standing in class to teach in May 12 ,1925.He was not be back to his dog for good.Hachiko still went to the station at 3 o'clock to meet its master without being known about master's death.But on that day,many train trips had passed by there.Without meeting its master,Hachiko didn't feel despondent.The small dog still stood there for waiting and waiting even though the sky was getting dark. Hachiko seemed to feel that a bad news happened but it still continued waiting for its master on time.Since then,people around the town has started to take notice of what Hachiko had done,its hopeless waiting for its dead master day by day.A gardener,a manager's station,everyone in the town rolated to feed the dog and take care of it. Spending a long time-many days,many months and many years-waiting for his master in hopelessness,Hachiko was still regularly present at the station at 3 o'clock despite having suffered in a joint's pain.Hachiko was too decrepit to stand there to wait for long time so after all,