I can not wait to go to college! I

I can not wait to go to college! I have enjoyed my search for college as much as anything I have done in my life. This quest has leaded me to apply at Name of College.
I realize a college choice is a big decision, but I think that I have done a great job in selecting a college that is right for me. I am fortunate to have parents that have exposed me to many different regions of the United States. Traveling beyond my local State You Live in backyard has greatly increased my desire to explore other areas of our country. Going to Name of College is a prime opportunity for me to experience another region.
As one of Number of Siblings children I have learned to get along with others and do my share of the work. I believe my family background will help me with my transition to college. Obviously, sharing a bathroom with other people will not be a new experience for me.
I plan on contributing as a student both in the class room as well as outside the class room. I plan to get involved spiritually, academically, and socially. I feel that if one strives to become as active possible through those three things, in order, one can achieve anything they set their mind to.
By attending the Name of College I will have the opportunity to take something from your school much more than a great education. I will have a well rounded college experience, a great education, the social life, and the life long friends that all accompany attending the Name of College. This is why I feel the Name of College college experience will out weigh any other experience out there.
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