Rill (lilt_rill) wrote, 2008-06-08

Rill (lilt_rill) wrote,
2008-06-08 16:32:00
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Title: Double the Fun
Author: Rill
Pairing: Asami/Fei/Takaba
Warning: NC-17, DP kink and complete pwp
Notes: So, I’ve been reading a lot of threesome pwp lately and got the urge to finally finish the double penetration fic I had three lines of. It’s blatant hardcore smut and a little more… verbally graphic than my usual work.
Disclaimer: None of the characters are mine. The vocab totally is though.



Akihito couldn't breathe. Or move. Or think.

There was a shift and he moaned. A slight thrust and he screamed.

"Do you feel good, Akihito?" The words were hissed right into his ear.

A tongue began tracing the outline of his other ear. "You do, don't you? You love having us both."

The two cocks inside him began moving, one sliding in as the other pulled out, then both withdrawing and slamming in at the same time and Akihito screamed.

Asami chuckled against his neck, sharp teeth biting down briefly and then warm lips began sucking the same spot. "And I thought you were tight before, Pet." He purred, his oh-so familiar hand wrapping around Akihito's cock.

Akihito felt as if he was going to explode, thrust against the hand.

Long, soft hair slid over his sides, his face. The sandalwood scent clogged his nose as a more slender hand wrapped tightly around his balls.

Asami's hand left his cock to support him; keeping him in the air as Asami rested against the wall.

Fei's hiss vibrated against his jaw. "Naughty boy, trying to cum. We're all going to cum together, Akihito. Do you need us to put the ring on you?"

"NO!" He screamed, struggling. Anything but the ring! They had left it on him for hours the last time!

"He'll be a good boy, Fei. We can use the ring next time." Asami's voice was soothing, his hands gentle as they slid over his hips to grasp Fei Long's ass and take control of the rhythm. Akihito wondered in a moment of surprising clarity if Asami was holding both of them up.

Akihito's cock rubbed against Asami's rock hard stomach, his legs were hooked over Fei's arms, which held them up, braced against Asami's shoulders.

He was stretched all over, expanded and ... and Asami had drawn both cocks out to the very tip.

Akihito took a sharp breath.

"Relax." Fei murmured and began sucking hickies up his neck.

Then Asami's biceps flexed and Akihito screamed, coming and screaming and spasming around the cocks inside him.

Asami's eyes were locked with his when he finally rejoined the world, anger evident as Fei panted against his back.

"You will be punished for that, Pet." Asami's low drawl seemed to connect directly to his cock. He felt a twitch and gasped as he felt the dicks buried inside of him shift. Fei began to almost beg, demanding that Asami hurry.

Asami growled and lifted them both as he turned them to slam Fei against the wall. Fei moaned and Akihito tried to shift to rub himself against Asami's stomach.

There was a snicking sound and Fei began babbling. Akihito tried to twist, but then Asami's hand found his cock and he slumped forward, gasping against Asami's collarbone.

He felt a second orgasm initiate and then the ring cut it off and he screamed again.

"I feel it every time you do that." Fei's voice still shook, but he seemed slightly more in control. "I love it when you scream. It's almost as good as when you come and you milk everything you can out of us. Your ass just begs us to empty into..." Both younger men moaned as Asami took control again and slammed them deep again.

Another three thrusts and Fei was incoherent, Akihito could not think aside from how fucking good it felt.

Asami's hand traced over his hip, the junction of his leg and stomach, the palm trailing behind as the fingers moved to trace over Fei's skin.

Then down over his ass and along the soft skin below his cheeks. A thrust and Akihito sobbed as Fei gasped.

Then the hand found in his cock and both men straightened and he fell hard onto their cocks, stretching so much he wailed and came again because the ring had vanished, feeling their semen flood him in the midst of his orgasm.

He vaguely felt Asami gently lift them both and maneuver them to the bed. After a moment, Fei gathered himself enough to pull out and Asami rolled them over, leaving his dick inside. Akihito cooed at him and attempted to pull away.

"Do you want us to have to re-stretch you?" Asami purred salaciously. Fei nuzzled closer.

"Mmm. I think we should. He loved it so much last time." He leaned up and kissed Asami. "This was such a good idea." He said against the man's lips, stroking his hand down Akihito's back and sliding one finger between the cheeks to dampen it in the semen dripping out around the still embedded dick.

"Good idea?!" Akihito managed to push himself up onto his elbows. He glared at both of them. "I'm not going to be able to walk for a week!"

"Good." Asami said and pulled him down for a kiss. Akihito lost himself in the soft lips and the hints of cigarettes and bourbon. Then Fei's finger thrust in and nudged his prostate and he moaned into the kiss as he involuntarily clenched. Asami's dick responded, thrusting slightly and hardening.
TAGS: pwp, viewfinder
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paranoia_woman
June 9 2008, 04:05:52 UTC
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Ah, ooo, uh, a little to the left I can't see. Ooo, nice.
I love this. I think I'll rewind and watch it again, I mean read it again. Stories like this always make me hope Ayano will one day write a three way with these guys, even if it's only done as a dream sequence. Thank you so much for this. Now...back to the beginning.
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 04:22:41 UTC
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Hehehehe... Oh yes, the pleasure of re-reading things. Mmmmm... I think I need to go re-read something. I just need to figure out what. Though I probably should be writing that cracktastic P&P thingy. Fei's so much fun!
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mammarella 7 years ago EXPAND
athenaartisan
June 9 2008, 04:54:05 UTC
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You real know how to fill our dreams with naughtiness, Don't you? The great smex Naughtiness. *evil evil Grin*

*Oliver twist momment* Please Rill I want so more!

Thanks
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:10:52 UTC
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Well, if it's any consolation, I usually am inspired by my dreams ^_~

*smirks*

I'll have to see what I dream up tonight.
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mammarella 7 years ago EXPAND
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lysryu
June 10 2008, 09:30:33 UTC
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Omg. *gibbers in awe at your drool inducing writing*.
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:09:59 UTC
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Thanks!
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kynthosyuat
June 11 2008, 07:54:47 UTC
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*Gasp* Practically left me breathless. Goodness.
What bliss. To have them all three together like this. It's a dream come thru.
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:16:19 UTC
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I like making dreams come true. It's a fun job! ^_^ Glad you enjoyed.
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christabel_rose
June 14 2008, 02:40:51 UTC
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Never, ever would I have thought I'd enjoy reading a double penetration fic...


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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:09:46 UTC
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Really? I find them, if they're well written, to be delicious. Personal pref I suppose.
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cirrus74
July 9 2008, 03:25:05 UTC
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Ooh, first time I've seen a double penetration fic for Viewfinder ^^. That was really hot! XDXD
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 04:23:51 UTC
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Me too, actually. Well, wait. There might have been one with a vibrator... It really seems that there should be more though, doesn't it?
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cirrus74 7 years ago EXPAND

*is breathless*
lady_black_cat
July 9 2008, 05:02:40 UTC
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*long gasp* Sorry.... I had to remind myself to breathe! Damn, that was hot!
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:11:39 UTC
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Oh! Please remember to breath! I don't like having deaths on my hands! ^_^
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cherokee1
July 9 2008, 05:09:49 UTC
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Mmn. Vivid imagery is vivid.
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:16:55 UTC
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That's actually why there's a warning ^_~
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cherokee1 7 years ago EXPAND
amaterasu08
July 9 2008, 05:11:00 UTC
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*lost coherent thought after the first 2 lines*

Uh.. *wipes drool*

Um.. I.. ah.. what was I trying to say? *stares bug eyed at the stretched out to the max ass*

Guh. *runs for more tissues*

BTW, first line, breathe seems to be missing an e
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:14:48 UTC
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Hehehehe... speechlessness. My favorite reaction.

*smirks evily*

I think I understand why Asami loves rendering Aki silent so much now.

Wait. No. He like it for the sex.

Maybe the powertrip's just a side effect!

(thank-you for catching that. i cannot spell for my life)

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mssupafan
July 9 2008, 05:11:49 UTC
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3some *drools, puddles to floor*
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:15:40 UTC
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*regards the pools of drool and pulls out a mop*

Knew I'd need this again. I'm glad you liked it!
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mammarella
July 9 2008, 05:28:00 UTC
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this is heavy... wow...
**crawls away**

lol
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:29:24 UTC
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*honks the horn*

Want a lift? I try and help when I write heavy stuff.
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mammarella 7 years ago EXPAND
natsurin
July 9 2008, 05:28:25 UTC
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Waoh.. this is juciy an d exciting...

*added to memories*
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lilt_rill
July 9 2008, 05:29:54 UTC
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Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it.
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a_ngua
July 9 2008, 05:42:50 UTC
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...!!!...???...!!!...
and I have to go to work now?(wobbly legs)
Better if I simply faint...
...and thank you for sharing this whit us!
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wickedly_evil
July 9 2008, 05:56:27 UTC
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*speechl