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there are a number of things I like to do in my free time. They are my hobbies. The hobby I like most is listening to music. I like pop music which make me feel relax when I hear. I often sing while listening to music. Another hobby of mine is collecting books. I love reading books. Whenever I find a book which is interesting I buy it immediately. I buy books from the bookshop near my house. Sometimes my friends and my parents give me some. Beides, there aer some hobbies which I like, such as shopping, chatting on the phone with my friends.... But two hobbies I've bên talking about are the most interesting hobbies of mine. They really keep me occupied and I am glad I am able to do them.

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当地有很多的我喜欢在我空闲的时候做的事情。他们是我的业余爱好。我最喜欢的业余爱好听音乐。我喜欢流行音乐，让我觉得放松当我听到。我经常唱边听音乐。我的另一爱好收集书籍。我爱读的书。每当我找到一本有趣的书，我马上买下来。我在我家附近的书店买书。有时我的朋友和我的父母给我一些。此外，有一些爱好，它们是我喜欢购物，我的朋友在电话上聊天......但两个业余爱好，我谈论的 bên 是最有趣的爱好我。他们真的让我占领了，我很高兴我能做这些。

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有很多的事情，我喜欢做我的空闲时间。他们是我的爱好。我最喜欢的爱好是听音乐。我喜欢流行音乐这让我觉得，当我听到放松。我边听音乐经常唱。我的另一个爱好是收集书籍。我喜欢看书。每当我找到了一本书，有趣的是，我马上买。我从我家附近的书店买书。有时候，我的朋友和我的父母给我一些。Beides，AER有一些爱好，我喜欢，如购物，和朋友聊天，在手机上....但有两个爱好我已经奔谈论是我最有趣的爱好。他们真的让我占领，我很高兴我能够做到这些。

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有一些我喜欢做的事情在我的空闲时间。他们都是我的爱好。我最喜欢的爱好是听音乐。我喜欢流行音乐，它让我感到放松，当我听到。我经常唱歌，听音乐。我的一个爱好是收藏书。我爱读的书。每当我发现一本书，这很有趣，我立即买下了。我从我家附近的书店买书。有时我的朋友和我的父母给了我一些。Beides，有我喜欢的一些业余爱好，如购物，与我的朋友…打电话聊天但两个爱好我BêN谈论的是我最有趣的爱好。他们真的让我住，我很高兴我能做的。