Write a paragraph about the job you

Write a paragraph about the job you would like to do in the future.
Becoming fashion designer is one of my dreams in my life. The first reason is that drawing has been my hobby since I was a child. I can draw everywhere and everytime. when I am under stress or in bad mood, I want to draw more and more because it helps me relax and become better. Secondly, designing clothes in my mind and then showing those ideas on paper with pencils or crayons is really interesting and attractive to me. Then, I can design and make clothes as I like for myself as well as my mother and my relatives. Finally. as for me, fashion designer is a job which is quite comfortable and creative, which is undoubtedly suitable with my characteristics.I am, however, still not a professional in the field of design, .....
I hope you can check my paragraph not only in grammar but also in spell and meanings and structure. IN this paragraph, I have not thought about the conclusion yet because my mind is empty now, Hope you can help me



Following are some of the ideas for you to pick from to answer this topic:

I will migrate to a foreign country and start my career there.
I will run a small business in my hometown.
I will establish a school in my hometown.
I will take my early retirement and visit different places.
I will fully spend my time with my family members and would do the farming
I will start a job and would work as an executive.
I will purchase a house at my hometown and would start living there.